Hi Dan, this looks much better now. Link works and you can delete last post with extended link. Ok so an interesting overview of your two videos...you seem to forget the directors name at the beginning, but you develop into an interesting discussion on comparisons, codes and conventions and mis en scene relating to his work. The green screen background is a bit messy in the background. Next time you do a piece to camera, which is far more successful in your case you must ensure the camera is set up on a tripod or stable base so you get your full face, torso in so we can see you whole body language to convey your messages thoroughly. It may be good for you to video this piece again and have your notes to hand with names etc so the piece works a little better. Mrs McD-H
Hi Dan, this looks much better now.
ReplyDeleteLink works and you can delete last post with extended link.
Ok so an interesting overview of your two videos...you seem to forget the directors name at the beginning, but you develop into an interesting discussion on comparisons, codes and conventions and mis en scene relating to his work.
The green screen background is a bit messy in the background.
Next time you do a piece to camera, which is far more successful in your case you must ensure the camera is set up on a tripod or stable base so you get your full face, torso in so we can see you whole body language to convey your messages thoroughly.
It may be good for you to video this piece again and have your notes to hand with names etc so the piece works a little better.
Mrs McD-H
ill do that miss thanks for the feedback
ReplyDeleteOk thanks Dan. Once you have completed it post up and I will double check and give more feedback. Mrs McD-H
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